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Darkness

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I feel empty,
as
time goes on.

It doesn't stop,
no
it just keeps flowing.

My heart beats,
but
I feel no emotion.

Sadness deepens,
then
the darkness comes.

Faking smiles,
its
almost normal now.

Can't anyone,
someone
save me from this darkness?

Then the light came,
shining
in my dark world.

It was bright,
warm
as I forgotten this feeling.

To live again,
happily
and not walk in darkness.

For he saved me,
love
saved me from the darkness.
This is a poem I wrote about my past when I was going through some difficult times in high school. I wrote this when I was at my lowest point and my fiance helped me pick my life up again. :D (Big Grin)  I enjoy feedback as it helps me improve my writing skills and gives me ideas for the next piece I write. Love La la la la 
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lamename13's avatar
So short but so deep. and impacting the reader is always a good thing.