So this is chapter number two and now since the story has progressed a little bit let me introduce your characters;  

Akria, the elemental master of water. Also the heroine, who has striking icy blue eyes with messy long dark brown hair. She is five foot with curves, her skin tone is tanner as she prefers being outside. Her marking is her crescent moon on her back with a black tiger sleeping on the bottom of the rim. Each ear has about four piercings all filled with the moon, hoops, or a feather. With finally a nose piercing that her and Eve got on their first rebellious trek outside the compound. Akria is twenty as her birthday is January 15th, 2035 her siblings (unknown if she has one). Likes; Eve, Running, water, meditation, fighting, sunsets, and her crescent moon earrings. Dislikes; Fire, Most royals and the country officials, the head priest and priestess, Solarera's elemental master and spirit, and of course Beck.  

Eve, the youngest daughter to the royal family (haven't introduced the parents yet so no last names for the characters yet  ) She is the heroine's best friend, as she has soft hazelnut brown eyes with long curly blonde hair. Only a few inches taller than Akria with a skinnier frame, Eve tends to be a little more porcelain since the royals tend to not be outside as much. She has both of her ear's pierced as well as her nose (explained before she went and got it done with Akria). Eve is eighteen as her birthday is April 28, 2037, her siblings: she has an older sister (presumed more but hasn't been introduced neither has the older sister). Likes; Akria, books, ballroom dancing, going to the town outside the walls, her older brother, and watching Akria sing. Dislikes; her older sister, the country officials, Solarera's first prince, and Beck.

Beck, one of the four elemental spirits: Water. The heroine's partner, when he is being addressed as the elemental spirit to the public he is the form of a sleek black tiger but when he is with Akria when both in disguise he can be in his human form. Cat form; he is a black tiger with very black strips. His eyes are bright crystal blue, he also has a crescent moon on his forehead. Human form; his hair is straight sleekly black that sweeps just right above his brow. Crystal blue eyes with a tanner skin tone. He is six foot one inch with a muscular build. Age he looks around twenty to twenty five as he is immortal and doesn't age having no really birth date. I want to save Beck's background, likes, and dislikes for latter on in the story.

Sorry my friends for the few swear words but with Akria I feel like her no bull shit attitude needed a few naughty words here an there  But I really enjoyed this chapter as I loved the recall she went through for the rest of her day plus her surprise when she finally crawled out of bed  but my favorite was the cliffhanger well not as bad as last time but still it was a cliffhanger    Other than that I may just write another chapter tomorrow but we'll see maybe if I get all my homework done. That's all for now   as comments are always loved by me and appreciated as I do tend to make grammar mistakes (if so point them out so I can fix them) critiques are also loved because it helps me improve my writing.